Pretty good!
The graphics were pretty good, but I think they could've been better.
Vocals were on point.
The sound effects weren't too great though. The shots, sounded like fire crackers. I think if you had used two different sounds and alternated them while they were shooting, it would've had a better effect.
The beginning was pretty dry. I could picture some snare drums beating away in the background as the narrator spoke.
If you were to make this one of those stupidity comedies, it would've been great to see much more stupidity.
Overall:
Pretty funny (made me smile but not chuckle)
Good graphics (good for a cartoon)
**GREAT SOUNDTRACK! (^_^)
Good stuff man. Keep it up!
i2
(oh yea, and keep the subtitles one font size for consistancy)