Score: 8

"Hmm"

submission: [SA] Don't Stop Moving - Final

date: September 29, 2008

The intro was a bit long.
I don't like the sped up vocals.. =\

The style of the song reminds of of the old 90's Eurodance stuff.

Very well made, great beats, melodies, singing, everything.
It just sounds oldschool.

Makre more pls. :) Favorited
4/5.

i2 (Paul)

Score: 8

"How's it goin' b9h?"

submission: 3 AM Trip

date: September 26, 2008

First off, I kind of like that nintendo feel to the beginning. The extra sounds running along in the background is nice. IT really sets the tone to it.

The song as a whole felt like a giant jumble of ideas into one. You have soooo many different melodies jumping out at you in here. Try to limit yourself because this is just too much for me. It really didn't "go anywhere".

The piano was a bit overplayed. I felt like the song revolved around that piano.

The beat!! omg the beat... I need it to be more IN MY FACE OVERTHETOP OMGWTF kind of thing. lol. Your beat was awesome, I just need it to stand out more.

Anyways, GREAT JOB just limit the melodies you use. Plan it out before you sit down. etc.

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 7

"Nice"

submission: Sailing Ships - Aaron

date: September 26, 2008

This totally makes me think of Zelda for some reason.
Anyways, It's really spacey as the reviewers below have said. I like the panning you've done in it.
Keep it up.

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 8

"Ooo"

submission: Red7 - David The Gnome

date: September 24, 2008

HEY RED 7!!! As always, I love your beat. I've never heard the original, but I can thoroughly enjoy it here. I can't get over how much I love your beats man. :)) I need to hear something from you that you made in 2008!!!!!!!

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 8

"Did you write the lyrics?"

submission: Here You Lay {=MMD=}

date: September 19, 2008

Did you sing them?

Instrumentation was spectacular. There were some parts where it sounded.. a little off tempo or something...
Some of the vocal parts had a little too many effects on it.

I think you should lengthen this by about another minute.

Have your ending become the bridge..
"Here you lay
oooOOOooo...
repeat this a few times and come back into the chorus, another verse then end with the chorus followed by the trailing : here you lay ooOOOoo's again.

AMAZING STUFF MAN!!!!!!!!
FAVED.

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 8

"Agreed with BacterialBag"

submission: C3 - Dusty

date: September 19, 2008

It really does have that lounge style, along with the minimal instrumentation. Only using what you need to the the job done. I kind of like it. It's really mellow and chilled out. Good job C3nt!!!!

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 10

"......................"

submission: {Departed} [MAC8]

date: September 19, 2008

Hello there Ian. Please export overnight while you're asleep and send out the full quality song!

I love the cut offs you did, the glitches are wonderfully well done. Simple melodies, what captivated me was the beat. It's almost like the melodies are only accenting the beat. It's new to me. Refreshing. Great Work!

-i2 (Paul)

Score: 7

"How's it goin?"

submission: Sharded [MotN] Prev

date: September 19, 2008

I like that "screaming" synth with the slow moving bassline. I only wish that the bassline was a little more aggressive. It could still be moving slowly but, maybe a bit louder?
I feel that the bassline should match the beat of a song.

Since you have the low bassline, and the high screams, I think you need a little something inbetween. Maybe even a simple first note hit that echoes throughout and changes when the notes of your bassline changes.

I see great potential in this song. Truly.

-i2 (Paul)

ps. I saw an old review you did of one of my songs. paying back the favor. :)

Score: 8

"Nice and Simple"

submission: Rondo in F

date: September 8, 2008

I like the waltzy 3/4. It sounds peaceful with a hint of playfulness. Like a child playing with his toy duck on wheels, when his dad comes home and runs to the door.

I love it!

Score: 9

"This is saxy ;)"

submission: Solus- For Schala

date: August 22, 2008

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I felt that at the 0:32 point, the sax and deep strings came in a bit suddenly. Maybe try introducing a few noted in the beginning, soften up the volume a bit and make it more noticeable when you want it to begin.

Great sounds, fantastic melodies, magnificent mood.
I love the story it tells.

-i2