Reviewing as we go
Quite a long intro. I like the effects and sounds in the background. Great ambiance.
That synth changes the mood a little, I kind of like the melody.
Everything seems to be building up to something powerful very slowly.
Kind of died down into a subtle kick beat.
I'm sorry, but I'm not diggin the beat at 3:12. Seems too rock-ish/late 80's electropop.
The song doesn't seem to be really moving anywhere. The same repetitive synth melodies.
At the 5:00 mark now. It's slowing down to some pads. Very peaceful.
It's really long with the same thing going on through out the whole song.
It has a feeling of building up to something only to go to a slow calm.
I can tell you put forth a lot of effort into it. It sounds very well made, just a little boring for my tastes. I could picture this being played in a lounge bar or something.
Don't stop making music.
-i2 (Paul)