Basic is right
This is very well made, but it isn't different from any other song out there.
Sounds just like a normal trance song out there.
It doesn't scream out number one hit.
It doesn't make me want to dance.
It doesn't make me want to roll.
It wouldn't be a favorite of mine.
It's just a song that would be stuck in the back of my hard drive somewhere.
Again, it's put together very well, and has some pretty good melodies.
Good beat/rhythm.
Just.. nothing new.
i2
Confused me
I Love the melodies in here but it just seems like... things are a bit off......
The beginning was awesome, i love that melody.
but i didn't really like the claps as a roll.
really good though!
i2
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lol, everyone's mistakeing those for claps...the sample has it labled asa snare, but i guess you have a point XD
Glad you called that out though, i'll keep that in mind for my next song XD Thanks for the review man!!
~Twistedtechnology
wow
amazing stuff man.
i only wish you had better choirs.
this could've been magnificant!!!!!!!
the quality of the choir really takes away from it though..
great melodies! great volume control!
hmm.. the audio seemed to "crack?" a little bit.
anyway.. GET SOME GREAT CHOIRS! and you will become amazing!
8/10 4/5
check me out sometime. i2
I thank you so much for your kind review! Yeah, I know it cracks. I used Finale 2006 at my school to make the Mp3, so it isn't exactly the way I wanted to sound. It cracks because all of the choir parts were on one MIDI track, a small fluke on my part, as I entered it in the program incorrectly. I'd love to hear this performed live as well, but first I need to get my lyrics in line :P.
Aside from that, thank you so much for the review!
-K. Solii
here we go
first off..
i love how the bassline and that melody seem to mesh together. and i like how that melody seems to jump around. it seemed a little off at first but the beat brought it together.
when the melody was combined with another synth it seemed more "full". a very delightful sound.
then when you brought in the other melody in with that at around 1:06 it was so subtle but made a big difference.
when you totally change it up at 1:31 i was like FCUK YAH!! lol. really nice change. i like how it sounded like bells/wind instrument/electric synth. good shit dude.
the new melody at 2:10 didn't do much for me. probably cause i didnt enjoy that synth all to much, but it still kept the energy flowing, and got me ready for the next change.
i like how when you introduce a new melody you cut off the hats then bring em back in in the middle of it. opened up my eyes to try something different. i kinda liked this one, how it sounded....... "stabby".. ?? :D
soo many different synths and melodies to go along with it. extrrreemely creative. you must've been exposed to a variety of different things growing up to come up with such creativity.
i love all the transitions, everything flowed into one another effortlessly. all the melodies kind of drifted into one another. GREAT effects. love em! each little break down. every snare hit.. nice.
the only thing i can think of to improve a bit would probably be a change in the actuall bassline. it was the same notes the whole way through. maybe like a pause for suspense playing only two different notes in the middle before introducing a dramatic melody.
other than that this song was STUPENDOUS! :) i'm running out of praising adjectives..... (they're adjectives right?)
9/10
5/5
DL!!
i2
Thanks for checking me out again! Sorry it's been forever for me to check back with your review. :(
I remember fussing a long time about the bass synth making sure it wasn't too overpowering yet had enough "Umph" to get the song going.
The first part you mentioned where the that synth coming in and helping out the other was hard for me to deal with in the beginning however after listening to it a few times convinced me to keep it and make the song change up more.
At 1:31 like you said, I felt the same way exactly. I really liked the melodie and so I went in and made it so it built up even further during the song so it's almost like your battling the elements. I didn't want this section of the song to come too early or too late either cause I wanted people to be drawn in by the song.
I understand what you mean at 2:10 with the synth not going as well with the song because it's more electronic than the other synths. I just needed a little more diversity there I suppose.
The parts after that I went back to the same sort of synths however I wish the song coulda ended a little better with a better melodie.
I totally understand what you mean about the bass line needing a change cause it does get to be the same after 3 and a half minutes.
I'm glad you enjoyed this song and hope to see you in my section of newgrounds again!
~RedSe7en
hey
volume was a bit low.
great song! love how the notes cause so much.... i can't find the words.. just as your title says, fleeing, disorientation.. love it!
i2
btw you should review more to get more reviews. :)
I wanted it at this volume. Haha everytime I put something quiet, someone says it's too quiet. Not that I'm complaining. You're entitled to your opinion.
Idk wtf got into me w/ this piece. Honestly, I just got bored and started putting notes down on paper (or down on Noteworthy lol). And well, it worked out. Much like what happened with Introduction Rondo et Scherzo.
The title just came to me. I named it right before I submitted it. This may be the first mvnt of a piano sonata, but who knows?
I'll definitely try to review more often. I'll return the compliment to you and review some of your stuff.
- MusicalRocky
wow!
is this a live recording of you playing? or is this a program?
cause you have great volume control.
i don't necessarily know this song.. but those last few notes at the end of each thing sound sooo familiar.. (don't know the technical term... bar?)
great job!!! would love to hear your song about jealousy.. :D
i2
This is actually still fruity loops. All effects, velocity and tempo control are done there. :-)
I'd highly recommend you find the song and listen to it for comparison. It's an old favorite of mine.
Thanks a lot for your review, and good luck with the girl situation.
wow
good shit... seriously...
fucken AAAMMMMAAAZING strings. love the tone of it.
i2
wow, straight tens XD Im glad you enjoyed this piece ^^
Im equally impressed with the strings myself, I found the strings and decided i would give them a try, feeling that the slight vibrato gave the emotion of a bittersweet goodbye. Because for me, the people here at newgrounds have taught me alot about the composition of music. And although I am said to say im no longer posting here, I can at least take the wealth of knowledge i have aquired from reviewers such as yourself ^^
Thank you very much for the review :)
I greatly appreciate it!
~Twistedtechnology
different
wow, soo different!
love those oriental sounding strings!
the background beach sound puts soo much into it also. gj!
AMAZING flute work. :)
yea.. clarity is down though cause there's a lot of cracking and distortion with a lot of high notes.
i like how this doen't follow a normal pattern. more of a natural flow. or something.. love it maestro.
i2
((((((my girl just broke up with me, made a minute orchestral piece, would love to hear your words))))))
a LOT of crackling!? Oh noes! Have I went and neglected the mastering to such a degree I have made the noobie mistake of saying "lolz, masterinzgs is noot necessery!"?
I created this piece through my speakers and not my earphones which I normally do, so I didn't hear any crackling (the speakers are like brand new condition as I don't use them... much). From here on, it's with teh Earphones!
Sorry to hear about your girl, i'll check out your work tommorow when it's not midnight!
Remember, the most beautiful things come from the darkest of places.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it ^^.
lol!
i remember i did a remix of this ages ago!! never submitted though..
reminds me of old times.. :)
good remix. just wishin you had used better synths. great melody! and i don't think any of the notes of the original were off. good job man!
nice strong bassy beat.
on the break beat though.. i think i know what you were tryin to do, but i think you should've used claps instead of the snare. on that part anyway..
i like the hats!
it got pretty repetitive too..
anyways.. GOOD JOB!
i2
check me out sometime.
4/5
wow
amazingly well done!!!!! love the choir in the bg.
really peaceful. love it!! great synths, steady beat, love the arp!!!
i2
check minez
haha thanks!
i love the arp too! lol
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